W.A.L.T.:Use more detailed language and description for audience and purpose independently.
Suddenly hornes started blowing and police started marching down the street then a crazy man came out with a lamb costume and gogles he looked very very weird. Every body laughed.
You definitely have describe things a lot more for example saying they marched down the street, and what the man was wearing. I like your starting too. I would like to see more and you ensuring your sentences are written correctly. Mrs Larsen
You definitely have describe things a lot more for example saying they marched down the street, and what the man was wearing. I like your starting too. I would like to see more and you ensuring your sentences are written correctly. Mrs Larsen
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