Wednesday 18 July 2012

Free Writing

W.A.L.T: Write paragraphs correctly.

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 Suddenly a giant elephant was flying in the sky talking to people wompa and a evil witch had cast a spell on him which made him talk and fly. He was spotted by a zoo keeper  that was feeding a lion when it bit his arm off and gobbled it down like it was roast chicken. blood was flying every where.Other zoo keepers came to help but the lion had escaped it was total terra.

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Twenty years later  mostly every one in that city had been killed by all of the raging animals.Out of no where a green slimy beast came flying out of the air like it was a rocket it was a disaster the whole city was under attack. Suddenly a swarm of rats came out of the drains and ate  all of the takeaways in town."Cut this isn't right" Then the sas came in but they were no match for what was going on in that city. But a little boy crawled out of the suer covered in poo,toilet paper and pee.

My Writing Activity/Bubbl Us

For Felts writing activity we made a bubble us about something we did in the holidays. This is mine i hope you like it.

Monday 16 July 2012

My Holiday Story

In the holidays when my ten year old cousin came up to my house I noticed a nerf package in his hand, he had brought a long shot pack nerf gun set. It had two guns and a dart vest, when we opened up the package we loaded the guns and straped on the vest. We were finally ready for war, I ran to hide behind the car but he notice me and shot me in the back of the head. After he had shot me he ran off and was nowhere to be found. Suddenly out of nowhere my cousin jumped out of the tree and shot but he missed so i quickly shot and it stuck to his vest. So then I chased him, all I needed to do was shoot him and I would win. As I shot him, he dodged it and the bullet went over the bank. He shot me in the chest and won the game.