Wednesday 18 July 2012

Free Writing

W.A.L.T: Write paragraphs correctly.

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 Suddenly a giant elephant was flying in the sky talking to people wompa and a evil witch had cast a spell on him which made him talk and fly. He was spotted by a zoo keeper  that was feeding a lion when it bit his arm off and gobbled it down like it was roast chicken. blood was flying every where.Other zoo keepers came to help but the lion had escaped it was total terra.

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Twenty years later  mostly every one in that city had been killed by all of the raging animals.Out of no where a green slimy beast came flying out of the air like it was a rocket it was a disaster the whole city was under attack. Suddenly a swarm of rats came out of the drains and ate  all of the takeaways in town."Cut this isn't right" Then the sas came in but they were no match for what was going on in that city. But a little boy crawled out of the suer covered in poo,toilet paper and pee.

1 comment:

  1. Planning first will help you ensure your paragraphs are about 1 thing. Mrs Larsen

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